Well, it's been a while. I've lost my train of though for The Phantom Princess, so for now I will be posting some of my older stories. Looking back on it, it's very similar to Greek mythology, with Persephone and Hades. Here it is:
Mira's Choice
Chapter 1
It was a cold, chilly
day in Jamaa. Snow lay on the ground and
the path was frozen with slippery ice.
The cold wind blew throughout the land, causing chilliness to all. Zios looked out the palace window with a sad
look on his face. For however many
powers he had, for a strange reason, he could not change this unlikely
phenomenon from happening in Jamaa.
The Temple of Mira
had been opened many years ago, and the statue still stood as beautiful as
ever. Since that legendary moment,
animals had come to pray to Mira for guidance.
And Mira helped them, one after another.
Now these cold days
happened week after week, with no chance of warmth. But one day, Zios received a strange
letter. It read,
King Zios,
It is I, the phantom king, out for revenge. It is my doing that your animals freeze to
death every day, that spring is impossible for your world. I give you the opportunity of giving your
animals back their daily lives again in exchange for your queen, the Sky Mother
Mira. You have until the week of the
Phantomalidays (or I suppose the “Jamaalidays”) to make your decision,
Yours Sincere Evilness,
The Phantom King
Zios stared at the
letter in disbelief. Of course he
wouldn’t give up his love. Then he
thought of his poor hungry animals and sighed.
He went to Mira to ask her advice.
“Mira, my love,” Zios
said. “We have received a letter from
the phantom king.” Mira sighed. “What impossible task does he want now?”
Zios sighed. “I think you’d better read it for yourself.” He handed her the letter.
As Mira read the letter, her eyes widened in
shock. When she finished, she folded
the letter up and closed her eyes. When
she opened them, a fire of love burned deep and strong in them. “I must do as he requests.”
“But-“
“Our animals are
freezing to death out there! They
starve, and how do you think they would feel if they knew their queen could
save them and would not?”
“Mira, it’s not like
that. I’m sure we can find some other
way-“
“I’m leaving!” Mira marched out of the throne room and went
to her bedroom. Quickly Zios ran after
her. He found her in her room, packing
all her belongings into her bag. “Mira,
our animals depend on you. How do you
think they’d feel if they knew their queen deserted them to go to the Phantom
King?”
Mira looked up and
glared up at him. “It’s not like that-“
“But it is.” Mira looked down again, and Zios sat down
next to her. “I’m sure we can find a way
to do this. Together.”
Mira looked up, tears
in her eyes. “You really think so?”
Zios smiled,
relieved. “I do. Now why don’t you go to bed? We have a lot of work tomorrow, getting ready
for the Jamaalidays.” He stepped outside
the room, closing the door quietly.
Mira sat silently in
thought. Then finally making up her
mind, she stashed her last few belongings in the bag, tucked it under her
feather bed, and sat down, waiting for midnight.
Chapter 2
When at last the
tower struck midnight, Mira cautiously stood up. She took her bag from under the bed and set
it on her nightstand. She walked over to
her elegant wooden closet and found an old cloak, black as night, and wrapped
it around her. She pulled the hood over
her head so her face was in shadow, not visible to others. Then she looked over at a picture on her
nightstand and stroked it with her talon.
“Oh Zios,” she murmured, tearing up.
“How I shall miss you. You were
and still are a great king of Jamaa. I
don’t believe I will ever see you again.”
Then with a great cry from her beak and a
flash of wings, Mira snatched up her bag and flew out her window into the open
night sky, cherishing her last sight of Jamaa.
She flew past the oceans until she saw another land, this one dark and
dreary, with a tall black gate rising in front of a black marble palace. Zooming towards the earth, she landed
silently on a black stone path, where silhouetted in the night sky, the Phantom
Castle lay on top of a steep hill. She slowly and carefully crept up the
path.
When Mira reached the
top, a tall black gate with pointed tips towered over her. In front, two phantoms stood guard. Taking a deep breath, she summoned her
courage and walked towards them. Pulling
down her hood, she pronounced,” I am Mira, Queen of Jamaa, and I have come to
fulfill the Phantom King’s wishes in hopes that he brings my animals peace.”
The phantoms looked
at one another and, nodding and as if they’d practiced, grabbed Mira with their
arms, stinging her badly, and dragged her inside the castle.
When they were
inside, they seemed to be in some kind of throne room. The room was built of black marble with
portraits of phantom kings hanging on the walls. A platform was raised above the ground with a
black throne on top. And who else would
be sitting there but the Phantom King himself.
The Phantom King gave
a great laugh. “Ah, Mira,” he
boomed. “I wasn’t expecting you to fall
for my trick.”
Mira, shaking,
stepped forward. “I have come,” she replied.
“Now give my animals their warmth.”
“Not in the slightest
chance,” rumbled the King. “Guards! You know what to do!”
The guards looked at
one another and nodded, then one grabbed Mira and held her tight and the other
grabbed an ancient scepter from behind the throne. Handing it to the Phantom King, he also held
Mira in place.
The Phantom King
raised the scepter and pointed it straight at Mira, with the glowing ruby on
the end twinkling cruelly. Waving it
around, harsh red light burst from it and went straight towards her. Momentarily stunning her, she fell to the
ground. The light twisted around her and
she felt herself getting weaker and weaker.
Finally, the light stopped and she collapsed, all her powers gone. The Phantom King opened a golden jeweled box
and pointed the scepter once again. This time, a soft bluish light came from it
and in it Mira could see all her lost powers reflected. Then the Phantom King closed the box and
locked it, her powers prisoner inside.
“Take her away.” The Phantom King dismissed Mira and the
guards dragged her out of the room. They
pulled her down flights of stairs until they reached the dungeon. It was dusty and colder than Jamaa. The phantoms opened the door and pushed her
inside. The door closed, and she could
hear the door click as they locked it with the key. She sat down in the cold darkness, thinking
of the life she’d left behind.
“Oh Zios, what have I
done?”
Chapter 3
Zios awoke to slanted
sunlight pouring into his room. He
smiled. He had been so relieved when he
stopped Mira’s crazy idea. And now he could
look forward to a day of Jamaaliday preparations with his queen.
All of a sudden, Zios
heard a knock on his door. “Come in,” he
said gruffly. One of Mira’s maids walked
in. She curtsied and then stood, looking
nervous. “Y-y-you’re majesty, Mira isn’t
in her room,” she stammered.
“What?!”shouted Zios.
The maid
trembled. “I went to wake her and she
was gone! H-h-her bed was cold. It felt
like she hadn’t slept there all night!”
Zios leaped to his
feet. “Well don’t just stand there! Get search parties!”
“Y-yes, your
majesty,” stuttered the maid, and she turned around and fled from the room.
Zios sighed,
wondering where Mira could be. Then it
hit him. But she wouldn’t have… Or would
she?
Zios raced out of his
bedroom, running down the hall to his queen’s room. Inside, all was quiet and the room was empty. He looked around. Without Mira’s face to lighten up the room,
it seemed dull. As his eyes passed the
nightstand, he again saw the letter that started it all. He walked over and picked it up. Now there was a stamp in the upper right
corner, as if the task had been fulfilled.
Zios walked over to the window and saw a long
feather resting on the windowsill.
Picking it up, it changed into a letter in his hand. He opened it up and read,
My Dear king Zios,
I don’t think I am mistaken when I say that we will never see each
other again. But please know that I love
you with all my heart. I did this for
you, for our animals, in hopes that they will see spring again. So please think of me in love and joy, and a
queen who cared about her people. Please
think of me kindly, in spite of what I have done.
Your love and former queen,
Mira
Zios stared at the
letter. It seemed he had been
right. Tears welled up in his eyes. How could Mira do this to him? As he re-read the letter over and over again,
sparkling tears trickled down his face beneath is mask. Now all he could do was hope, that wherever
his queen was, she was safe.
Chapter 4
Mira had been on her
prison for one night, and in the morning she awoke to a phantom shaking her
harshly. “The phantom king wishes to see
you.”
Mira stood up and
followed him reluctantly into the throne room.
“Ah, yes, there you are. And how
might you be doing today?” The phantom king’s voice was sarcastically sweet.
Mira glared at
him. “Get to the point!”
“Touchy now, are
we?” The phantom king laughed. “Well anyways, here goes. I know you thought I was going to take away
the winter right away but I, uh, may have forgotten a few lines.” He paused thoughtfully. “Perhaps a few errands?”
“Stop wasting your
fancy words on me,” grumbled Mira.
“Fine, if you will be
like that!” yelled the Phantom King.
“Today, you shall set the trap in Jamaa Township that shall capture
animals.”
Before Mira could
open her mouth, the phantom king pointed his scepter at her and a gag covered
it up. “Do it now or Jamaa has no chance
of spring again,” he growled menacingly.
Mira knew she had no
choice. She took the trap in her talons
and flew out of the castle.
“And remember, my
guards are watching you!” The dying
voice of the phantom king faded away.
Finally getting to
Jamaa Township, Mira waited until no animals were looking and then swooped
down, setting the trap in the center of the Township. It changed color to blend in to its
surroundings. Mira flew back into the
sky before she was spotted. As she
soared over the Township, she heard shrieks of pain and shock but couldn’t
bring herself to look. Feeling terribly
guilty, she flew back to the Phantom King.
Over the next couple
days, the phantom king had Mira run many “errands” such as stealing things from
the castle and basically causing complete chaos. Every time she had no choice, for the phantom
king would make her. Somehow, she had
gone so far from the Mira her animals knew and loved. And one thought rang through her head, day
after day. What’s happening to me?
Chapter 5
Mira looked around
her prison. Shadows loomed around every
corner. All of a sudden, a voice called
out. “Who’s there?” Mira turned around slowly. “Who is it?” The voice called out again. Mira saw a small shadow trembling in the
corner of the room. “It’s okay,” she
whispered. “It’s Mira, your queen.”
Slowly and
hesitantly, a small rabbit, pure white as snow, stepped out of the shadows, her
eyes a deep blue. She gasped when she
saw Mira, and then raced away.
“Don’t go,” Mira
called, stretching out her wing towards the direction where the rabbit had
gone. Then she let it fall down to her
body again. It was hopeless.
All of a sudden the
room blazed with light. For a moment all
Mira could see was fire, and then she could pick out the shapes of animals
surrounding her, holding torches for light.
It gave Mira the sense of great power, even greater than her lost
ones. But strangely, she felt no fear,
but the feeling of warmth and protection as she met the gazes of the animals
around her. “Who are you?” She asked
this question with no dread.
Slowly, the fire died
down and Mira could make out the shape of one animal of each kind in
Jamaa. A tiger stepped forward, his eyes
glowing like rubies. “We are the Sky
Mother and Fathers before you and your king,” he rumbled. “We, like you, have been tricked by the
phantom king into getting our powers.
We, like you, feel lost. But now
that you have come, the darkest corners of the world hold the faintest flicker of
light.”
A pretty fox took his
place. “The phantom king aims to become
the most powerful being in Jamaa. So
far, he has succeeded, tricking all of the past kings and queens of Jamaa into
giving him their powers. We have failed
the animals.” The fox shook her head
sadly.
A snow leopard walked
up to her and touched her shoulder with her tail. “But now there is hope, now you have
come. You are special, one of a kind,
and our only hope of destroying the Phantom King. If he is to capture your husband, Zios, he
shall take over Jamaa. We need to stop
him! I’m Calia, this”-she nodded towards
the fox- “is Emali, and the tiger is Granel.”
“It’s very nice to
meet you Calia, Emali, and Granel.” Mira
nodded to each one in turn. “Shall we go
now?”
The others glanced at
each other, and then nodded. “There’s no
time to lose,” Calia explained.
“Alright,” Mira
said. “Let’s go.” Mira silently walked towards the prison
door. She held out her talon and poked
around in the lock, hearing a satisfying click before the door creaked
open. Beckoning to the others with her
talon, she crept up the stairs.
When they reached the
top of the stairs, they were in the empty throne room. The others raced past Mira, eager to
leave. Mira hesitated for a second, and
then grabbed the jeweled box next to the throne. Thrusting it open, she watched with delight
as the bluish light floating around her, swirling around until she felt strong
again. Then more rainbow-colored light
swirled out of the box, surrounding the others in a rainbow mist, and when it
cleared, they looked more awesome than ever.
“Our powers!” exclaimed Emali, now a
stunningly beautiful fox glowing with radiance.
“They’ve come back!”
As if at a silent
command, they all started running towards the exit, running faster and faster
until they were faster than a cheetah, with Mira soaring over them. Just as they burst out of the gates, the
Phantom King appeared in the throne room.
“No! Get them!”
When the animals got
to Jamaa, they flew down to the palace.
They raced through the halls until they came to the throne room. Mira burst in first with the other animals
following.
Zios looked up in
surprise. “Mira!”
Mira dipped her
head. “I’ve come back.” Speaking before
Zios could get a word in, she went on.
“There’s no time to talk now. The
Phantoms are coming!”
Chapter 6
No sooner had the
words left her mouth than an evil laugh filled the room. “You’re too late, you stupid bird.”
Mira turned around
and there, in the entrance, was the Phantom King himself. “All the animals I need to fulfill my plan,
right in the same room. Perfect.”
Mira stepped
forward. “No. I won’t let you harm my animals again.”
The Phantom King
smiled slyly. “And how exactly do you
think you can stop me?”
Mira looked at Zios,
who nodded sadly. Mira turned back. “By negotiating.” She went on, taking a deep breath. “Every time the ground freezes and snow falls
to the ground, I will go to your kingdom, and there I will stay.” She stepped forward. “But when the weather is fine, and the
cold is gone, I return to my land, to provide guidance and wisdom. However, at no time whatsoever are you
permitted to our land.” She paused.
“Which you are trespassing on right now,” she pointed out. “So I have permission to drive you out.”
She flapped her wings
and magical wind blew through the windows and swept around the Phantom
King. When they stopped swirling, he had
gone.
Chapter 7
Mira turned to
Zios. “I’m so sorry. It was I who set the traps, I who
stole. Can you ever find it in your
heart to forgive me?”
“Of course I can,”
replied Zios.
Mira turned to her
friends, the Sky Mothers and Fathers.
“Thank you,” she said.
“You’re welcome,”
they whispered. The wind once more swept
through the window and the Sky Rulers started becoming fainter. “May we meet again some other day…” And then they were gone.
“Well.” Zios was the first to break the silence. “I think we have Jamaaliday celebrations to
attend to!”
So Mira came and went
for many years. Eventually, her temple
crumbled, but her statue remains. When
there is coldness in the air, we know Mira has left us, and her statue freezes
over with despair. When spring returns,
her statues comes alive again, and glory fills the air.
Really good! You're very creative (:
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