Hey jammers! Here's another one of my older stories. Looking back, there are so many things I'd like to change in all these stories (the entire plot, for instance) but I will try my best to keep them.
Mira’s
Sacrifice
One day long ago in Jamaa, Greely
was in his cave. His cave was located in
Coral Canyons, out of sight to all animals that passed by, though they weren’t
out of sight to him. Looking around, all
seemed well in his homeland. Animals
were chatting, going off to the Art Studio to take art lessons from Peck or
going to Epic Wonders to buy the newest items.
Greely decided there was no point in hanging around and went farther
back in his cave.
Making a quick decision, Greely
swerved into an almost hidden opening in the side of his small-looking
cave. The corridor darkened as he
walked farther on, making it almost impossible to see, but his night vision let
him see where he was going. He passed
many more hallways before turning sharply to the left. As he kept going, he felt the dirt floor
slanting under his paws and knew he was going farther underground. Making another turn to the right, he pushed
onward. After making several more turns,
an eerie red light was visible in the distance.
Walking closer, he stepped forward into the room.
The sight was breath-taking.
The underground cave was almost dark, dimly lit by candles on the
wall. Black wooden tables lined the
sides with all sorts of strange things that Greely used for his magic. In the center of the room, a gray stone fire
pit was glowing with the strange red light.
Greely walked toward one of the tables. It’s been a while since I looked into Jamaa’s
future, he thought. He scanned the
table, looking for one particular object- Ah ha! There it was!
He reached out a paw and scooped up a blood-red stone that looked like a
ruby. He then walked over to the fire
pit. He dropped the stone into the
center of the fire pit and started chanting an ancient incantation. Then he stopped and sat down, waiting.
At first, nothing seemed to happen. The stone remained in the center and the fire
pit just kept glowing. But Greely knew
it would happen, and after a couple of seconds, he was proved right.
All of a sudden, a great fire flew up from the stone,
spreading over the fire pit. It blazed
with a red-orange color with the stone just visible in the center. He stood up.
“Oh, ancient spirits of the past,” Greely declared. “Show me our future and guide our paw
steps.” At once the fire reacted,
stretching higher and higher until it almost touched the cave ceiling. Greely stared into the fire intensely,
looking for a picture. All of a sudden, black figures started to come into
focus in the fire. Spidery legs appeared
and one eye was in the middle of their heads.
They were marching in troops and slowly the Township appeared through
the mist. Phantoms heading for the
Township! He had to warn
everyone. He leaped into the fire and
was on his way.
Greely was being transported to Mira’s castle. It felt like time was rushing past him and
all around him fire blazed and wind blew in his fur. Once, he made the mistake of stepping forward
and the fire singed his paw; he leaped back and stayed in his small circle.
Eventually, the fire seemed to get smaller and smaller and
finally, it seemed to disappear. Greely
looked around. He seemed to be in the
courtyard. He leaped to his paws and
raced inside. Wandering around the
castle, he managed to find the throne room.
Without waiting to be called, he burst in.
“Mira!” called Greely. Mira was sitting on her royal throne (very much alike the paradise throne
we have today) and talking with a maid.
She turned around, alarm on her face.
“What is it Greely?”
“Forgive me for bursting out like that, but I have terrible
news,” Greely replied, running up to her and giving a quick bow. “The phantoms are on the attack again. They’re marching towards Jamaa right now!”
“Not again,” said Mira.
She sighed. “Can’t they take a
break from attacking for once?”
“Apparently not,” grumbled Greely. “I’ll get the alphas.” He turned around and raised his paw in the
air and a red light shot out, spreading in all directions. Then the light seemed to pull back towards
him and on the end of each beam was one of the alphas.
“What a great way to wake up,” moaned Sir Gilbert, shaking
himself from the beam.
“Yes, Greely, couldn’t it wait?” Peck groaned with the
thought of her lost sleep.
“No!” growled Greely.
“There’s no time waste. The
phantoms are coming now!”
Before the words had left his mouth, phantoms crashed into the room
from all directions. The alphas started
fighting as hard as they could. Right
away, Greely could see it was no use. He
fought his way over to Mira.
“Use your powers!” Greely called to Mira. She tilted her head as if
she hadn’t heard, then nodded. All of a
sudden, a phantom lunged at him. He fell
backwards. He felt shocks from the
phantom. He knew he was about to die.
All of a sudden, a flash of golden
light beamed through the throne room.
The phantom turned around in surprise, and then faded into nothing. Greely stood up. All around him, the other phantoms were fading too.
Greely saw a life-sized, golden,
glowing statue in the exact same place that Mira had stood moments before. It was the statue that had saved him. He looked around the room for the real Mira. She was nowhere in sight. He tilted his head to the side, confused.
Right then, he noticed that all the
alphas were kneeling (well, as close to kneeling as animals can) around the
golden Mira statue. Hundreds of feathers
lay at their feet. Greely tensed. What had become of Mira? In a rush, Greely realized the truth. Mira had sacrificed herself to defeat the
phantoms. Her spirit would remain
forever inside the golden statue.
All of a sudden, a phantom
appeared. “You will not destroy my
brothers!” With a blast of lighting from
his tentacles, the statue started fading away.
Quickly, Greely used his magic to grasp Mira’s spirit from the
statue. When he looked up again, the phantom
and the statue were gone.
Greely used his powers and quickly
created a sack of statues. He took a bit
of Mira’s spirit and put some in each statue.
“These are the only ones,” Greely rumbled. “They deserve a special spot.”
Greely waved his paw and they
disappeared. “Their new home is Jam Mart
Furniture.”
And to this day, only one statue remains there, gleaming and
golden.
This story is excellent! How old where you? The grammar "issues" are fine, I barely even noticed! I will for sure wait for more of your excellent work!
ReplyDeleteI think it was a couple years ago. I'm glad you enjoyed!
DeleteWhat is the statue? What is it called as an item?
ReplyDeleteI don't think it's for sale anymore, but it is called the Mira Statue.
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